blue pilled blanket

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

blue pilled blanket

on the floor

in the cube room.

 

illusion of softness and warmth

on tile and concrete.

sterile, bleach, barking dogs.

 

gray-haired lady

pats the blue shirted arm.

settle down here,

he’ll be right in.

 

blue jeaned legs sink to the floor

onto the blue pilled blanket.

sleek striped dog fur

settles on the blue pillow,

against the blue jeans.

 

starched white coat, sympathetic gaze,

blue juice in the syringe.

softly spewed meaningless words.

rehearsed death talk.

 

blue eyes shed shiny spots

dampening fur below.

muscles tremble,

painless, they say.

blue serum meets red blood.

 

heavy head rests

on the blue shirted arm.

barrel chest heaves

one final sigh.

 

dead muscles spasm in the absence of a heartbeat.

nose muscles twinge, try to suck air into dead lungs.

false warmth, false scent.

not alive.  anymore.

 

blue shirted arm lifts

the furry dead face.

salty kisses many kisses,

leaking human nose

sucks in her scent,

 

before lowering that dead,

precious head to the

blue pilled blanket.

 

 

04/16/09

Maisy RIP 12/28/03 – 01/15/09

8 Comments

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8 Responses to blue pilled blanket

  1. Exquisite and poignant poem. My last Boxer dog went through this on December 3, 2005. The loss of beloved pet is truly excruciating. Your writing is really lovely and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work. Have a healthy and happy New Year filled with much love and laughter!

    • Thank you so much. I am coming up to the third anniversary of her death, and will write a new poem then. Maisy was an American Bulldog; I still have her half-brother Kirby, and three other canines. Maisy was the first dog I have ever had to euthanize, and she was only five years old. Happy New Year to you as well!

  2. jay

    That’s just beautiful, Gina. Sniff.

    • Thanks Jay. I tried to focus on things like colors, sights, smells, imagery, so it would not get overly mushy and lose what a poem needs to be truly great. I consider this poem my best to date, but I’m not much of a poem writer.

  3. I think you are an exceptional poem writer. This is simple, understated, not cluttered, and gets right to the powerful emotion.
    Beautiful tribute to a wonderful dog.

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